Pete and Jane
-- The ambulance has taken Jane --he said over the fencelooking into infinity,into the future.-- Chest pains, vomiting. Its Bank Holiday, - they wont do anything until tomorrow. --Pete and Jane have...
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This is very touching, brought tears to the eyes - realistically sad. Very nicely done.
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My wife's going to get a great big hug tonight when I arrive home from work...compliments of your poem here. I'll have her read this too, and maybe I'll get an even bigger hug back.Quote:If tomorrow...
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I've read this a few times today, davie ... and it has touched me each time. you've captured so much here ... many things that lie beyond my expression ... this is beautiful and touching ... and no,...
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Oh my... *sniffle* This is so touching, and achingly sad.Beautifully done, Davie."A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness...It finds the thought and...
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The power of this piece lies in the reality of the situation...and the thought that one day, we too could stand in that place...bereft of words or thoughts, wanting only to be part of the whole...
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beautiful..sad.. very captivating piece, davie. Wonderfully penned...sweetly told! Enjoyed ~Alaura
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Spirit, Red, Beth, Valoe, soulsease, Alaura - many thanks for your kind words. I'm glad the reality of the piece comes out - it was based (loosely) on a real event, but is meant to have a more general...
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This piece has a sad beauty which expresses the reality and the fragility of our human condition.A heart wrenching write, Davie.Thanks,coyote "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with...
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